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We walk along the water
hand in hand
both a little bit nervous
hoping our hands won't betray us
by sweating too much

Sitting on a bench
overlooking the dark water
the sun has long gone
but it still shines in our hearts

Your hand touches my cheek
softly brushing my hair back
as you move in closer
our hearts beating fast

Soft and careful
your lips touch mine
trembling slightly
my fingers find your hair

Been kissed before
but never as deep
never as loving
never as perfect

I shed a tear
out of pure realisation
this is the feeling
I've been waiting for all my life
First kiss
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:icondreamsofjelly2001:
dreamsofjelly2001 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! I love how you write ^^
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StarSpirit5 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!!! <3
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EpicDracoFan13 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
I've never ben kissed and that was so sweet. i hope my first kiss goes half as well...IM SCARED!
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:iconattduke:
Attduke Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Same here, I know how you feel. IM TERRIFIED! But ready... .-. Harpo
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:iconcarlyle-zimmermann:
Carlyle-Zimmermann Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student General Artist
AWESOME!!!
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:iconmebemishy:
mebemishy Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that was beautiful. can't wait for my first kiss <3
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:iconbecursed:
becursed Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Writer
This is beautiful.
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for thinking so :)
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:iconbecursed:
becursed Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Student Writer
you're welcome!
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:iconjen-tle-life:
jen-tle-life Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
Love it!
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks muchly ^^
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:icongalaxiegirl:
GalaxieGirl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Too cute =]
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:iconemoposhgirls:
EmoPoshGirls Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010
what song's your signature from?
I know it... bt i can't remember.
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:icongalaxiegirl:
GalaxieGirl Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The song "Good Girls Go Bad" by Cobra Starship.
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:iconemoposhgirls:
EmoPoshGirls Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
YES! now i remember. thnx x)
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconlatul1pe:
LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
*grins* :) ...*and smiles some more* :)
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:iconmysticlotus:
MysticLotus Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008  Student
Beautiful! :heart:
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:icongettingaway:
gettingaway Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008   Photographer
lovely
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bellatherese Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008
omg..this sooo wonderful..
uve captured the feeling and put it into words.
many kisses in a lifetime..but only some u remember,
i cudnt describe it as beautiful as you.....well done, delilah.
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug: :)
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:iconbellatherese:
bellatherese Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008
omg...this is just beautiful....
its how i would describe it too, i have two big tears in my eyes..
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:iconwishfulwritings:
WishfulWritings Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2008
Wow!! this is amazing!!
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:iconlatenightbrainstorm:
LateNightBrainStorm Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
One word, amazing. It creates a perfect picture in my mind and makes me remember my first kiss.
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it :)
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:iconfarsh-nuke:
farsh-nuke Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
what a wondrous talent you have
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: thank you
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:iconfarsh-nuke:
farsh-nuke Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
that's allright
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:iconmissfresh:
missfresh Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
Oh my gosh, it's so beautiful. It made my heart feel warm :P
I already had my first kiss but it wasn't as romantic as he one you described. I wish it was :(
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Well the one descibed in the poem wasn't technically my first kiss :)
But it was the best one, with my one true love ^^ I think you can have more than one "first kisses" in a lifetime.
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:iconmissfresh:
missfresh Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
Haha well you can have a first kiss with another person right ?
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly ^^
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Ghostbusterlover Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww~... this warms my heart. It's lovely! :heart: I've never been kissed, but I already know the feeling... one can daydream a lot. *sigh~* ^___^

You did a great job with this one, so sweet and wonderful. :heart:
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, make sure you safe that first kiss for someone you truly love ;)
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:iconghostbusterlover:
Ghostbusterlover Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :aww: I'll make sure to safe it, but I don't think I'll ever get my own "prince". :XD:
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AllieCalhoun Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
It is beautifull! :O but ehh, a bit impolite i know: you submitted many romantic poems last days. Why are you just now that inspired? New boyfriend? :P (sorry, but i really like to know)
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Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Nah I've been with him for over a year now, I just never got to submitting poems until now :) Just recently discovered this website, you see.
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AllieCalhoun Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
oh, you wrote the poems earlier? THey are very nice btw!
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Not all of them are written earlier, he just keeps inspiring me :)
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:iconalliecalhoun:
AllieCalhoun Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008
that s good love... :P
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XX-DOUDE-XX Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
love it!! Hug
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:iconevync:
EvynC Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
That was great, i hope i get a kiss like that every new kiss i recieve.
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I hope so too :)
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:iconevync:
EvynC Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
:aww: that was really:smooch:tastic
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:iconjon453:
jon453 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
You captured the essance of a first kiss perfectly
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:icondelilah-loveless:
Delilah-Loveless Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Wow that was fast ^^ Thanks for the :+fav: and compliment :)
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:iconjon453:
jon453 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008
I just clicked on my devwatch when you posted this.
And there's no need to thank me you did the hard work!
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